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Post by Unbreakable Shard on Oct 30, 2015 6:02:26 GMT
Thanks! I think I am gonna try some out soon and some here.
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Post by Unbreakable Shard on Oct 30, 2015 6:10:58 GMT
Cryo chased after his brother but was stopped by a force.
"Let him be... I believe you aren't ready to kill him..." A voice called.
"Who are you?" Cryo asked.
"My name is Blood. Now Mr. Frost, the voices tell me you hold back when fighting. You have so much strength, why?"
"I don't want to kill."
An older man appeared. "But it is only natural, the world is a cruel place. The strong pray upon the weak. The Puppeteer taught me that."
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Post by Unbreakable Shard on Oct 30, 2015 6:22:58 GMT
Cryo was confused. "I'm sure they were just wrong."
"You are just a pawn, you might think you control your own destiny..." Blood's body turns static and becomes a little boy. "You live by rules set for you..." Then a little girl. "All since the beginning..." Then back to the older man. "But now, I hold your strings. I'll decide wether you live or die."
"I am my own man-"
"Actually you are mostly machine. A real man wouldn't be so weak. Now I know you aren't doing your heroics on your own accord. Your boss uses you. You are a pawn. I'd give up and let nature decide."
"I'm not weak."
"All those soldiers you killed, they might have been on the opposite team but they are people. Ever think about them?"
"No..." He gulps.
"You hold back but you've killed. How easily you ignore the loss of life when it suits your convenience."
"I'm just protecting those who can't fend for themselves."
"Then who saves the weak from the man who saves the weak?" Blood asks as she pulls out chains. "You can die and I'll make sure you have a clear conscience afterward.
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Post by Berdani212 on Oct 30, 2015 8:31:39 GMT
Just keep writing. God, I wonder what you'll come up with if Snow was your charrie. Then again, you said you wanted to do something back then...
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Post by Unbreakable Shard on Oct 30, 2015 15:08:29 GMT
Cryo made an ice blade. "Let's dance!"
Blood smirked.
Cryo slashes.
Blood turned static and the blade went past her.
Cryo was confused. But he kept trying.
Blood continued to taunt him by being impervious to his attacks. She used the chain and it wraps around a metal globe, she then swings to knock Cryo back. "This is what the world is, it is all stringed up like Pinocchio! It has people with hearts of stone. Pinocchio was made of wood then became a boy. Sadly, the Earth won't ever change. History repeats and rhymes. One terrorist dies and another takes their place. A repeating cycle. There was General Santa Anna, then replaced by Stalin, and now Al Crimson. There will be a new civil war, a world war, another Hitler. If I'm gone another will be in my place." She smirked at him. He was going to be her successor.
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Post by Unbreakable Shard on Oct 30, 2015 17:01:42 GMT
Cryo made a second ice blade and lashes.
Blood swings again.
Cryo jumps in the globe and freezes it to the ground using the frost to lead back to Blood.
Blood quickly changed form and levatates.
Cryo leaps and caught Blood by suprise. He froze her to the ground.
"Good! Good! Now finish me off!"
"I-I can't."
"But there is only one way to stop me. I'd have to die again."
Cryo couldn't comprehend the next act. He sliced her head clean off. He actually knew that what she said was true. Her blood covered the ice blade.
Her head was still alive though. "Now, I have left my legacy... with you. You and I are both innocents who had a tough past... we are not weak... you are the strongest... I see that now... Through my teaching... I molded you into... someone who takes... action." Her head became a dark mist. But the most fades and a book was left in its place.
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Post by Unbreakable Shard on Oct 30, 2015 17:13:07 GMT
Cryo opened the book.
"Being weak made me learn the hard way that killing was a necessary duty. The Puppeteer took advantage of my weakness and took away my freedom. Starving to death was inevitable... but I was fed with the truth. I broke free of my weakness and dominated my killer. I believed that if we looked at the animals, we could see our purpose. I believe mankind is a mistake. We were wrongfully gifted with free choice. We still had instinct but nobody ever uses it. Animals fight to be in the top of the food chain. They are boundless creatures. Then I realized there was a pattern. They were being controlled by something greater, The DNA of the soul... This DNA controls everything. I looked hard into history and our present. Nostradamus came to mind. He predicts the future using events from the past and present, he noticed a pattern. Bad thing was, even he had wrong guesses and his writing was even flawed. I decided to study for myself. I've come to realize that war will soon come. Blood will be spilled. And I will die again in the hands of a blind man who gained the ability to see. I took the name Blood to remind myself of my future and the DNA that controls us like puppets.
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Post by Unbreakable Shard on Oct 31, 2015 1:04:44 GMT
Cryo sighed. (A gifted mind but emotionless, not even spirit lies within her... Her ordeal must have done this.)
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Post by Berdani212 on Oct 31, 2015 3:49:08 GMT
Knight, can I ask you something?
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Post by Unbreakable Shard on Oct 31, 2015 4:59:43 GMT
Sure!
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Post by Unbreakable Shard on Oct 31, 2015 9:32:36 GMT
A ninja walked near Crimson tower. Being a master of the silent kill, nobody would know he "borrowed" a couple things. His name was Dane. His past was always him training to be a great warrior. It was with careful thoughts that he decided to take it to the streets. He quickly stole an Exo-Suit and got away. He destroyed the tracker on it as he did.
Something lands in front of him. "You think you can steal from me?" Redd says.
"I just did." He smirks.
"Ah what I smarta**! Sorry but you pushed my hand..." He got out a blade.
"I'm sorry as well, for your loss." He gets out his pulse blade.
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Post by Berdani212 on Oct 31, 2015 13:37:09 GMT
Was there anything going on when you were writing our book? I mean, I know your writing, you can write VERY well. But, the book didn't turn out anything as great as any of these. I don't mean to sound creepy or anything, I'm just concerned.
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Post by Unbreakable Shard on Oct 31, 2015 14:27:38 GMT
I put boundaries on myself. On Wattpad I was afraid to go too far. Cursing, Blood, and overall scariness. I didn't want these qualities to scare people away.
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Post by Unbreakable Shard on Oct 31, 2015 14:28:40 GMT
Here I can say whatever I want and nobody cares much.
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Post by Berdani212 on Oct 31, 2015 22:39:08 GMT
Oh. That makes sense. I get it now. That was probably a good decision.
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